I've seen twice what could have been. I can't see the vision through your eye's. I see the sun through my own vision now.
Reach and feel the twilight of night, there is no warmth from the moon. A shadow but formed, a dream still chased. And I cannot feel the touch of your something real. I am more then I will show.
Walking on a thin surface of hope, I know life moves on below. I wish I could show you, all that is here. I am the thought that passes in mind. A painters touch upon the temple of mind and curses of violence and love.
I will learn how to nod at yesterday and face the horizon of my future. I saw below the surface and I saw the teachings of life before the shadow was cast.
Iris will continue to grow.
And I will reach to the limits of strength that can be found here. It's the shadow to be revealed as my sky begins to clear.
Cease to amaze the most formidable moments.
Chances gone into the twilight of moments. I was shown what was needed to be discovered. And I will never push the past in front of me. It is where it belongs, in dreams and shadows. It's time to start a new future, be patient for me.
Out on the horizon I will chase time and fall to my knees in pleading forgiveness. Time will align me.
It's another beautiful day.

13 comments:
It is another beautiful day.
and those really beautiful words....
LOVE that last paragraph...but, why do you feel the need to plead for forgiveness?
just curious.
"Walking on a thin surface of hope, I know life moves on below."
very nice, love this sentance.
Life is fragile....like a thin layer of hope.
good stuff.
so wonderfully expressed.....am curious what has brought you to this moment of confession........just know...that is each breath we take lies many elements...one of which is hope.....at times like this, breath deeply! Peace Marc :)
Beautifully written!
~Erika~
I LOVED that! That was so beautiful!! Very inspirational those words and the melody they make together. - Jessica
ahhhhhhhhh. judi
Congrats on making Editor's top picks!! :)
You deserved to get Editors pick. Unlike some people where all they write about is them. Congradualtions!!!
Congrats on making the top five!!! You earned it ........ : )
Diane ........
It is indeed a beautiful day! Congratulations on hitting the Editor's Pick list, I think they confused the top 2, but otherwise a grand job. I am happy for you. You deserve it. Bruce
Congratulations..... Virginia just told me you were on the editor's pick list! So well-deserved and congrats!!!!! judi
Congratulations on the Editor's pick!! I didn't even know until I came and read the comments from others! My alerts must be messed up again. :(
But it is well deserved, needless to say. This entry, breathtaking. Beautiful! Like a piece of classic literature! You have such an artist's eye in a writer's mind.....so many poignant phrases laced together. Almost poetry, almost a song..... but definitely a wonderful statement of truimphant entry into a new day for you!
CarrieCMc
http://journals.aol.com/ccmcwriter/TheWayICameToBeMe
...aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Judith
one of the best i've read in awhile
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